Many university students prefer doing part-time jobs during their studies? Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages? Why?
Nowadays students who are completing their masters usually like to do some work while their academics. I think merits of these practices outweigh its demerits, because it helps the students to meet their daily expenses and also release some financial burden from parent’s shoulder.
Doing jobs make the students capable to raise funds so, that they can incur that amount on their daily needs and do not need to postpone their demands on later. Moreover, this technique also teaches them the value of each penny because they put their efforts on that particular task and then claim their wages from the employer. To illustrate, Students of Lovely Professional University go for their jobs after the school at various places like McDonald, Subways, PVR and so on. After receiving the salaries, they plan for worthy shopping like books, laptops and many more. Therefore, they never waste their hard-earned money because they know their budget very well.
Helping the parents to reduce some economical presurre is also a great privilege of this act, because when they get salary from the owner, they do not demand pocket money from them rather they pay some portion of their earning to them so that they can save or use that for other expenditures. For example, now numerous students are going to migrate other countries for completing their higher degrees. Over there they do some works after the classes and earn not only for their own survival but also to send some amount to their families for saving purposes. Hence, they are not just complete their studies but also become helping hand of their elders.
Conclusively, paying attention towards jobs while studying is not just good for them instead it is valuable for their guardians. That’s why advantages are over then disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43228227765 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3998742344 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239821333361 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100590144852 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459238610093 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158662148265 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315791266488 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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