You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission to fortify me to work in the headquarters of the company in America for six months. I would like to further mention the reason behind it in detail.
Since, our company is planning to expand the global reach of the products, getting the opportunity to work in the head office of the organisation will definitely aid me to enhance my skills and expertise. Moreover, it will not only allow me to gain knowledge of trade strategies, and regulations but also about products’ global market trends deeply. Thus, I will be able to work with full potential, building a self-attained career as well as generating long term profits and sustainable growth of the firm.
I have talked to Shweta, junior sales manager and she has agreed to take on my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I shall check my emails and if the need be, I shall be available for emergency calls. Once I return to my mundane routine, I would endeavour to work extra hours to catch up on anything I missed.
I would need your support to get all the necessary approvals, documentations and, email confirmation, along with, arrangements for travel and accommodations. Kindly also enlighten me on the reimbursement policy of the organisation.
I hope you will consider me suitable for working in the company’s head office. I look forward to hearing from you swiftly.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04958677686 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15504459554 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5689895464 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262485031154 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819832450223 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793866264289 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143006348717 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820577573742 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.