You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter about to allowing me to let work from our company's head office for some span of time, About six months. I have some emergency at my home country and as per my knowledge our company's main office is also located in same country. Moreover, Its situated very near by my family house so I can work from there temporarily.
You might aware that I am originated from Russia and I migrated here for study and career, However after completing my study I found a job in this company which I love to do. Although my all other family members are living there only. Last week only, I came to know that my father is having last stage of Brain tumor and he has very few days left. Besides that, He is giving very hard time to other family members for treatment so eventually I decided to stay with him until his last day and serve him. Even I could not thinking to leave the job as it is now only main source of income for my family. However, From my side, I already talked with my colleagues about this matter and they all agreed to give me support by helping in my current project. Along with that, I also ready to work remotely any time you need me either day or night while I am away from office.
I am genuinely requesting you to consider my case as humanity issue and allow me to work from there and seek permission from upper management, If needed.
Yours Faithfully,
Jessica Max
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 281, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...me country. Moreover, Its situated very near by my family house so I can work from ther...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...job in this company which I love to do. Although my all other family members are living ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 521, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...ast day and serve him. Even I could not thinking to leave the job as it is now only main...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5037593985 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25566416026 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9844143818 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164747962241 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632355486981 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596952535876 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116777946208 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650402779587 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.