Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate between teenager being prepared for the adult life after joining part time job have been controversial. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order to take the positive and negative facets of this issue. some holds the opinion that people should not let their children for the part time job for the preparation of the adult life as they are more vulnerable to spoil their future by engaging some futile job. however, some believe younger people will more adopted, if they are prepared for their independent life with little exposure like let them to start part time job, in the outer environment. Likewise, I strongly support the claim that younger people become more prominent to start their adult one by joining part time job. In what follows, I will conspicuously illustrate my reasons to justify my view.
The first exquisite point to be included is that younger people learn the outer environment little by little with their parents supervision. In this case, they will know the outer surrounding with slow pace but effectively. Furthermore, they will not make more panic to the outer problem even they have to face as they have deep in their conscience, there is parents to cover up them. On the other hand, one can imagine how daunting will be the task as if they have to face the whole scenario at once. We can correlate this aspects as the students face the difficult question paper without its preparation. Since, the younger people, who do not have chance to understand even little custom of the outer world, may commit some horrendous act. Thus, parents supervision gives the person more relief and people with ease is better leaner as well as performer.
Secondly, another point which deserve some words to say is that financial strength is paramount to start adult life smoothly. once people become independent, they have to figure out all the things by themselves. In fact, the financial matter or where to cover it up become essential for the people to be in good condition. Employing in earlier reasons, younger people definitely step up to start the new life. however, they have not do certain things or job before it may have to roaming around where to go, how to earn and especially what to do. panic and anxiety may cover their most part of the life. some people may go for the depression as well. that's why, it looks important to prepare financially to begin new adventure of life.
Lastly, the aforementioned reasons which cross the mind at the first glance. however, there is no means by the only reasons available. In fact, there is a subtle reasons which must be borne in mind. doing job in initial stage of life makes people to learn the value of everything; they will learn to the value of time, money and social relationship. In addition, they will become more mature in taking the decision. Consequently, in most of the case, they make decision with deep analysis and consult with senior.
To sum up, part time job in earlier teenager helps to makes the people more mature. Plus, with support of the patents, they will well prepared for the adult life with ease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, likewise, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, in fact, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2643.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84065934066 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48706956767 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468864468864 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7671177335 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1379310345 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8275862069 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10344827586 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255960578682 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727996334882 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650592008962 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169135354534 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873831297178 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.