Internet boom has changed people's life. internet has made many tasks easy and simple. Tasks like information gathering, entertainment, shopping has been simplified. internet shopping usually referred as online-shopping has become very popular among people of all age -group. It has become so easy to order anything from internet like books, air tickets, groceries, clothes. One can choose from multiple optIons.
Internet has many shopping platform known as websites to order item of your choice which give people thousands of options to buy. Some advantages of buying online are , variety of options, time savings, offers/discounts available online, comfort of ordering from own's place. Online shopping saves a lot of time. It also saves the effort of going to shops and buying stuff. Online shopping platforms usually offer discount to attract customers. So many items can be bought at price lesser than their price at shops. Items like books, artifacts and special items, which sometimes are not available at local shops ,or come at special demand. These kind of items can be ordered from internet easily. Recently, internet has revolutionised food industry, food delivery applications have taken the food industry by storm. These applications has also increased the business of restaurants, food shops ,hotels. Internet has solved problem for food consumers who did not wanted to take effort to come to eat. Now they can just order food online. Internet has also made an impact on transportation industry. Ride hailing apps like UBER, OLA, etc have changed cab industry altogether. Cab Rides taken through these applications have become cheaper than traditional taxi services.
There are some disadvantages of online shopping. Online shopping can affect retail seller's business. Internet shopping can force local vendors out of business. Items can be found faulty or defective. There might be issues with quality and size of items. But recently , in many shopping platforms options of return and cancel order has been introduced. So, in case customer get a faulty item , it can be replaced.
In my personal life, I regularly use online shopping for many purposes. For food, transportation, clothes, bus ticket booking etc. It saves me a lot of time and effort. Time which i can use somewhere else. Recently, I booked a bus ride to m hometown using internet based application. It cost me less than usual booking amount due to offers given by application. Overall I am having a very good experience with online shopping.
It can be concluded that online shopping is becoming more popular day by day. There are many valid reasons for its popularity. It has many advantages and they are surely overweighing disadvantages. It can be said that online shopping is making people's life easy and comfortable.
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 100
- The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 449.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26948775056 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80550863313 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54565701559 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 16.0721442886 243% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5080049314 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.6666666667 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5128205128 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 7.06120827912 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 3.4128256513 557% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178006791732 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426974379958 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417724794549 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104179781213 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475136870222 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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