In many countries, around the world, life expectancy is increasing.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion.
In these days, every country witnessing a hike in life expectancy of its citizens. There are many benefits of an increased life span as well as drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss them, including the idea of how we can make the life of our elders more comfortable and enjoyable. Overall, I think the advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
The main advantage of a higher age of citizens is the life experience which they can pass on to their grandchildren and they can learn so many things which parents can never be able to teach their kids. In today’s era, most parents are working, they do not even have enough time to spend with their kids. And children felt alone and they miss on some important life teaching and here grandparents can play an important role. Grandparents are mostly free as they are retired from work and they can pass on the stories and their life experiences to their grandson and granddaughter which would be helpful in their future.
On the other hand, with higher life expectancy there is a burden of high medical cost on economy and individual as well and it put a strain on the health care system. With older age, many uninvited diseases attack the body as it starts growing weaker and weaker day by day. To maintain oneself they need regular medical assistance and care which directly leads to higher medical costs. For instance, after a certain age, they need help with day to day activities. Despite this fact, it doesn’t matter as in turn grandparents are always happy around their grandchildren and they both can help each other.
To summarize, weighing up on both side of argument, I would say that although high life expectancy has some downsides, particularly financial ones for the nation and individual, fact that no one in the society has to worry about as the benefit side overweighs it an
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- In many countries, around the world, life expectancy is increasing.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion. 61
- Many foods are shipped from far away Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 56
- In many countries, around the world, life expectancy is increasing.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1185770751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64423037129 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.344832629 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236527947848 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081266493114 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433074799941 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141054551614 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343737139054 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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