Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?
What is your opinion on that?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Males are employed for most of the high-level position in the organisation. Whether the government should reserve the higher position in companies for females is always a debatable question. In my opinion, I do believe that in todays world women are not considered in an y way lowers than men and should be employed for high skill level jobs.
The society has always believed in the theory that boys are the bread earners of the family, while girls are supposed to take care of the kids and family members. From a time, a child is born this thinking is embedded in their mind as a result woman don’t feel that they are compatible enough to work in multinational companies at superior positions such as the vice president and the chief executive officer. As a result, most of these positions are occupied by males’ section of the society. Moreover, the companies are keener in selecting the male’s candidate for higher position than females as they have a mindset that females once married and have kids will leave the organisation.
However, in present time with more support from media, non-profit organisation and film industry, the thinking of individuals and community has change, considering women as equal to men. Parent motivate their girl child to study hard and to become self-reliant and confident. Many big organisations give more preference to female candidates as they think they are more capable than makes in terms of completing the task on time, handling queries and managing all the work in the organisation. The government should not only reserve the higher positions for females but should also motivate them to work and earn a handsome salary through campaigns.
In my opinion, I vehemently agree that the government should take the necessary steps in reserving jobs for women and to motivate them to work and earn their living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...odays world women are not considered in an y way lowers than men and should be emp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, while, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06129032258 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77139581357 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4093794617 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1710118651 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727080337734 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700612207786 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127279540465 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839518314779 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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