The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying IT at university from 1985-2015Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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...-2015 and it is showed with numbers. The graph illustrating that number of ma...
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...n 1995 it indicator increased to 13000. during the 10 years this indicator increased s...
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...eased slowly and it was 27000 students. after that in 2015 it became 40000 male stude...
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...eased slowly and it was 27000 students. after that in 2015 it became 40000 male stude...
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...nts who were studying at university. So, I cant say that number of female stu...
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... studying at university. So, I cant say that number of female students only...
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...as 2000 and in 1995 it raised to 3,500. then until 2010 this indicator increased and...
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...s indicator increased and became 32000. after that during 5 years the number of femal...
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...s indicator increased and became 32000. after that during 5 years the number of femal...
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...decreased also it was 29000 in 2015. In conclusion I tend to think that in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40526274841 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8925665707 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7777777778 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294078956669 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128678548014 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12952756368 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217378254278 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139255303157 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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