The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying at IT university from 1985-2015.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying at IT university from 1985-2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 421, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...amount of men students kept increasing. In the end in 2015 the amount of male stud...
^^
Line 13, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in 2015 the amount of male students was much higher than female students, its 40...
^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...00 of female students. In conclusion male students were always mo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27210884354 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46594651622 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537414965986 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3911816876 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261553222357 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129249336579 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099558426943 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218333563172 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100082787537 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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