Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Having a chance of being parents after some years of marriage have become possible due to the existence of various medical treatments. In fact, this practice support to the nation’s economy very well.
Being educated it is an obligation of every citizen to contribute their services towards their country so that they can spend stress free life. Nowadays overpopulation is one of the major issues, for my country where per capita income is very low. In this condition if married couple will think about family planning then they can help to release pressure of population from the society. Late child or only one child is a best option. To illustrate excess people means extra consumption of available resources which may result depletion of natural resources like fossil fuels, water, mineral and so on and expansion in the rate of inflation. Hence less birth of child will favor to raise standard of living.
Saying, no to own child or late child can promote the practice of adopting orphan children, who need parents for their care and education. For an example, in a survey report it showed that every year authorities spend 25% of the national income to run orphan care centers so that they can get free education, meal and jobs. Therefore, if people will become guardian of orphan children then they will incur on their studies, food and career from their own income and that portion of national income can spent in some other required sectors like medical, insurance and many more.
Conclusively, now youngsters have understood that there are so many other responsibilities after wedding except pregnancy which need more attention like elder care, own house, job settlement and financial sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ociety. Late child or only one child is a best option. To illustrate excess peopl...
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Line 5, column 643, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and expansion in the rate of inflation. Hence less birth of child will favor to raise...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... raise standard of living. Saying, no to own child or late child can promote ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12411347518 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59110929758 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3417113843 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169290747005 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563020505298 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359925453936 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870067594115 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477297433666 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.