Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
In recent years, majority of couples do not want to start family life at a young age especially not in their twenties and this tendency does not seem beneficial for society. This essay will disagree with this statement as it is causing greater rate of sterility and lack of bonding between partners.
With the aging process, there happens radical change in human body in respect of metabolism, hormones and fitness etc. Moreover, exhausting modern lifestyle and food habit have a harmful effect on health. Accordingly, a person becomes less infertile after being thirty than their early age. As young generation has a tendency to have children in their late thirties, the rate of barrenness all over the world is increasing which is alarming for the entire civilization. For example, in Japan tender aged employees are so devoted to their career that they do not even want to get married, let alone have kids. In consequence, a great number of people are suffering from depression at some point of their life.
Secondly, a child is the center of a family and the symbol of love between husband and wife. When couples do not have a baby and remains busy with themselves and career only, gradually their relationship become pale and boring. As a result, the married people do not feel the urge to perpetuate their intimate bonding and ends up getting separated. Many recent studies show that spouses having no children in their early life experience a higher chance of divorce later.
In conclusion, late marriage and not having broods a priori is not an auspicious practice because these are the vital factors behind increased infertility rate and break ups in community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01067615658 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60498220641 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629893238434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0416627803 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264837218513 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808514031989 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051668756809 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136114517678 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670169464308 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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