Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
There has been much discussion revolving around the issue whether late marriage and having children in thirties would be beneficial for the society. This essay disagree with this argument and the reason behind this viewpoint will be discussed in the following paragraph.
Firstly, when people start their family in the older ages, there may be a bigger generation gap between them and their children. This might cause issues with the upbringing of the infants as parents are less capable of understanding new generations' needs and behaviors.
Secondly, some researches has shown that the risk of pregnancy may be higher in the older ages. Therefore, there would be more new-born with genetic disorders or deseases like DAN syndrom if the age of having baby continues to increase. Lastly, the adaptability with the new partner and the entusiasm to bring up a child may dicrease when people get older. This may result in more divorces and careless patterning styles as less and less people would be able to change and adapt to new situations.
It is true that not only do young people need to think about their career progression in their twenties but also do they need to save money in order to have a comfortable life in their thirties. However, this is a perfectionist ideal, which is not significant for having a healthy and successful relationship and children.
To sum up, although it is true that focusing on creating a great career path and financial life in one's twenties may help them have a better family life in their thirties, however, this essay believes there are much more drawbacks to this view, like age-gap between children and parents, pregnancy risk and less willingness to change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... careless patterning styles as less and less people would be able to change and adap...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...great career path and financial life in ones twenties may help them have a better fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99649122807 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6453580778 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6575453011 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225735091966 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870683596804 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529190868776 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131579698946 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563439833235 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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