The presented bar chart illustrates the number of people in jail between the years 1930 and 1980 in five different countries (Great Britain, Australia, the United States, New Zealand, and Canada).
Overall, the United States remain at the top for almost all the given period, where the number of prisoners rate between 100 thousand prisoners to 140000, meanwhile, Australia and Great Britain have the lowest number of prisoners.
In 1930, Canada marked 120 thousand people in jail comparing with 100000 in New Zealand and the United States and nearly 20000 in Great Britain. In 1940, the number of prisoners in the USA increased to reach almost 130000 while this number decreased in the other countries. In 1950, Canada returned to the top with almost 120000, and more than 100000 in the USA while GB, Australia, and New Zealand remain at the lowest rate between 40000 and 50000.
In 1960, the number of criminals in jail increased for all countries but the order still the same until it declined in 1970, where GB, Australia, and New Zealand marked the same number which is 70000, the USA and Canada remain at the top with almost 100 thousands and 800000 prisoners respectively. In 1980, the United States marked the biggest number of prisoners with almost 140 thousand while the other countries remain between 50000 and 90000 prisoners.
- Nowadays more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face Is this a positive or negative development 79
- The chart below show the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on the idea that they are also responsible bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagr 56
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980 84
- Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experience 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thousand prisoners to 140000, meanwhile, Australia and Great Britain have the low...
^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Britain) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...meanwhile, Australia and Great Britain have the lowest number of prisoners. In 1...
^^^^
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...umber decreased in the other countries. In 1950, Canada returned to the top with a...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lowest rate between 40000 and 50000. In 1960, the number of criminals in jail i...
^^
Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ands and 800000 prisoners respectively. In 1980, the United States marked the bigg...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00892857143 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35238629928 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441964285714 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2078388789 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.285714286 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119555564961 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703768913392 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609644430308 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973766557195 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610317512556 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.