Agree or disagree society is strict with young people to obey society rules.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Youngsters are the most important part i...
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...ty. When communities become strict with these generation or soft, it is all for their best. How...
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...s become strict with these generation or soft, it is all for their best. However,...
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... strict about rules and they should obey . In this short essay I will demonstrate...
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...nion in the following paragraphs. To begin with, when youngsters treated i...
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...d in strict way, they will behave better . Which thing has insure their acceptance...
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...n strict way, they will behave better . Which thing has insure their acceptance in th...
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...ey will behave better . Which thing has insure their acceptance in the society later o...
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...at could help to spoil them. As a result , they will behave in very unaccepted man...
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...heir peers. All that has negative effect on their future and their personality. M...
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...ple of this. After my marriage, I faced a difficulties to be pregnant. Then after six years of...
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...ars of waiting I got my son. Due to this , I pampered my son too much,which thing ...
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...Due to this , I pampered my son too much,which thing made him disobey and defy person....
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...e faced a lot of obstacles in the school . Since he was disobey , thing lead him t...
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... obstacles in the school . Since he was disobey , thing lead him to be unpleasant stude...
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...les in the school . Since he was disobey , thing lead him to be unpleasant student...
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...im to be unpleasant student in the class . Moreover, he cannot made a lot of frien...
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... face all these troubles in his life. However, it is true that a lot of rules ...
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...to eat or how to speak with older people , could create a barrier between childre...
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...speak with older people , could create a barrier between children and the society...
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... other hand, this rule can create strong , well manner new generation , can lead t...
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...eate strong , well manner new generation , can lead the society to development . A...
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...on , can lead the society to development . As I mentioned previously, If people an...
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...le and all society treat children softly , that may reduce their stress when they ...
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...negative effect on the whole society. In conclusion, I believe we have to be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the whole, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62168141593 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41652785352 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446902654867 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5487299962 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0344827586 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5862068966 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68965517241 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225037929202 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593587925634 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724983316282 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161916486299 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521443445984 0.0645574589148 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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