The Internet provides us with information about life and cultures of different countries, and some people say it is not necessary to visit these countries to learn about them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Nowadays, some people believe that the advent of internet has decreased the need for traveling to foregn countries become familiar with their culture or their way of living. This essay agrees with this view for some reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, we should mention that the proliferation of internet has provided us with the opportunity of meeting people from various part of the world online. To clarify, not only can we use these platforms for communication but also can we use them for learning about differnt cultures. For instance, there are some websites created just for people who want to become more familiar about another country's culture, literature or history. where, they are able to connect with people from that specific country and have discussion about the topic they like. Secondly, there are many online encyclopedia like Wikipedia that are enriched with all kind of information about all countries and we can access to this data by a click of a mouse. Lastly, there has been many documentaries produced by government of countries about their culture and life which is accessable through internet!
Addmitedly, the pleasure of visiting a country, talking to local people and observing thier ordinary life is not comparable to what we receive from reading or watching blogs or videos. However, the cost of a trip to another country to collect cultural or historical information in person is not affordable for everyone.
To sum up, although it might be more pleasurable to travel to a country to learn about it, internet has made it possible to gather data about all aspect of one culture or local life without being obliged to be in that place.
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- The Internet provides us with information about life and cultures of different countries, and some people say it is not necessary to visit these countries to learn about them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'encyclopedias'?
Suggestion: encyclopedias
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09540636042 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66966217068 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0924332507 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333257427924 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128376510073 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272005472783 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182473641815 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619716750606 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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