People Living in the 21st century are enjoying a better quality of life compared to people who lived in the previous centuries to what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been much discussion revolving around the issue whether 21-century- people are living a more quality life or the people who were living hundreds of years ago. Although some aspects of our lives has developed during last centuries, I don't believe that people have completely better life in 21st century.
In one hand, nowadays, we are benefiting from some high quality factors of life. To begin with, we have different kinds of facilities from great social transportation to public education institude. I remember my grandfather told me that he had to walk to another village every morning when he was in elementary school because there was no means of transportation. In addition to that at this time, we don't need to work physically hard and no matter how bodily powerfull or weak we are, we can be successful and have a good life. Also, these days we not only have various sources of food but also so many health care centers, therefore we never need to be concerned about starvation or death by a flue.
In another hand, 100s of years ago, certain factors of life were much better compared to current centurey. Firstly, they had healthier life style as they were eating organic foods and they were obliged to have an active life as they had to produce all they needed. It is also worth mentioning that they weren't breathing polluted air which has all kinds of harmful and dangerous chemical in it. Secondly, they were living a relaxed life far from the anxiety and stress of big-city-life. And last but not least, they had much more time to spend with their family and friend and enjoy the social life, what we lack so much in this fast-pace era.
To sum up, in the light of aformentioned reasons, while I think that in some certain areas we have a better quality life, there are some aspect of a good life that we never have had a chance to experience compared to the people who where living centuries ago.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67647058824 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50541973084 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0900101393 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232344382416 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901211606122 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106336783526 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187634054392 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138376405467 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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