Xenophobia is increasing in the western countries. what do you think are the reason/effects and what can be done by the government and individuals?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the rapid increase of xenophobia in western countries and xenophobia means anything that can be perceived as a foreigner or alone. there is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myraid of concerns in society. In my opinion, causes of xenophobia have more negative effects than positive in the society.
On the one hand, critics may point out the significant problems of feeling as a foreigner in countries or cities. For example, men unlike in the past now have more phobia issues as they have assumed that they are alone in the world and nobody cares about them.
On the other hand, there are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that suffers from xenophobia affects on the brain of person for a community in various ways. Firstly, the person suffers xenophobia's attack because of excessive consumption of drugs According to "Humanities magazines December edition 2018", the portion of alcohol consumption increased from 34 percent to 67 percent today. Secondly, smoking also kill's cells in brain because it contains lot of toxic chemicals.
Lastly in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking a great initiative to examine and educate about depression and anxiety the impacts of ignoring xenophobia. People are encouraged to spend most significant portion of their time in community centres in order to compensate about the issue they are facing.
In a view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks the causes of xenophobia are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1375464684 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82292016592 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0228829788 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118598921927 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382062008061 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506339703407 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623901794343 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543458285492 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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