The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The given bar chart compares the amount of electricity produced and consumed in top ten nations in 2014.Unit are measured in billion kWh.

Overall, China dominated the amount of electricity in terms of production and consumption, while the lowest position in the top was Korea. In addition, most countries made more electricity than using it, except for Germany.

As can be inferred from the data, the discrepancy between the production and the consumption was not huge in China, Russia, Germany and Korea at around less than 100 billion kWh. Specifically, in 2014, Chinese produced 5398 billion kWh and consumed 5322 billion kWh. In Russia, the two numbers were relatively equal and stood at around 1000 billion kWh. Similarity, the amount of electricity made and used in Germany and Korea were about more than 500 billion kWh and roughly 400 billion kWh respectively.

A large electric disparity can be seen in the remain nations. As the second rank, American produced 4099 billion kWh and used 3866 billion kWh. The amount of electricity made in Japan, India, Canada and Brazil was more than 100 billion kWh compared to that of consumption.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17989417989 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68125053816 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.303961274 43.030603864 373% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.8 112.824112599 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168656373935 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11293182109 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956918142633 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14482108512 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995029708448 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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