It is argued by many that getting admission in an university is tough for both the wealthy as well as the poor people. I disagree with this notion as the rich have ample resources that makes it comparatively easier for them to get enrolled in an university.
The first step is fulfilling the eligibility criteria by acquiring the passing grades. In order to prepare for the pre-requisite tests, a rich individual has various options available to him. For instance, he could buy the expensive official learning material or get enrolled in some coaching institute that has professional teachers who have in-depth knowledge of these tests. In contrast, the poor depends on the free learning material which is present on the internet and some cannot even pay the expensive entrance exam fees.
The next major step is the university fee which the rich has no problem paying, but it is the poor who again faces hardships in this category. Although, many universities provide considerable scholarships, it is based on merit and not financial status of an individual. Thus, even the rich, who can easily pay the fee, get these scholarships which could have been a life saver for some of the less fortunate. While the only available option for the poor individuals is to take educational loan by keeping some mortgage, some even do not have that luxury and end up losing admission to that university.
In conclusion, I believe when compared to the poor, the wealthy individuals face less struggle to get into the university as they have significant amount of money to pay for the coaching institutes as well as the university fee.
- Some people think that e books are better to be used for education in order to go paperless Discuss its advantages and disadvantages Give your own opinion 79
- The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one langu 61
- Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rgued by many that getting admission in an university is tough for both the wealth...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...niversity is tough for both the wealthy as well as the poor people. I disagree with this n...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...vely easier for them to get enrolled in an university. The first step is fulfil...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce, he could buy the expensive official learning material or get enrolled in som...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... which could have been a life saver for some of the less fortunate. While the only availabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95255474453 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84047838195 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4924409547 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157773350498 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618533620919 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460212052511 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105749708222 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409021020063 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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