Nowdays crime rates has been tremendously increasing without any fear and specially in India people have become more violent and fearless due to absence of strict laws. Now crimes are being done daily and day by day it is fourfold increasing.
Iacking of strict laws, easy punishments, amnesty are some major factors which are responsible for these scary and terrible crimes.
Crime rates are pinnacling in today's world and somehow we all are responsible for the happening of these crimes. Crimes like theft, rapes, murder, chain snatching have become very common because people do not get terrible punishments. House theft's, jewellery theft, vehicle theft, chain snatching all these have become daily news. People does not get frightened in doing murder because firstly one can get murder weapons very easily with cheap rates. And secondly they manage somehow to get amnesty very easily.
It is so embarassing for our Country that women have become unsafe here and being raped day by day. Nirbhaya rape case will always be a black day in our history. She was brutually tortured by the men but still that girl fought up to her last breath Now men have become a giant and in today's world we even can not believe on our friends and relatives as we heard already about so many crimes in which close one's were the real culprit.
These crimes can be erradicated only if strict rules and laws with proper implications should be followed. For serious crimes like rape and murders strict and fixed punishment like death penalty should be given without relief of amnesty. Somehow corrupted political parties, police department, courts etc. are also responsible for the mishappening of these crimes.
A deep survey has already proved that the rate of crimes has been abruptly increased in the recent past years in India. Every individual must have to pay concern to erradicate these problems or crimes at their best level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39762252033 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6753473909 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4705882353 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112203030603 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368283224919 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342450297573 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566704606049 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403065273329 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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