Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In some occasions, some people ought to speak a foreign language due to their accommodation in that country which I agree totally as it may cause serious social issues in society and also individual troubles.
A good reason that speaking an exotic language in terms of living in a foreign country bring nothing but social and practical problems is that people who are native there have many phrases and informal words, therefore, a beginner person who steps in that country may face with various vocabularies daily. there might be a misunderstanding between what the native people are talking and what that foreign person understands thank to dictionaries. Such as, a phrase like” I was in her shoes” which have a completely different meaning from its usage. therefore that person seems to be in troubles in everywhere he decides to communicate with other people, particularly in office where he must earn money to survive in that country.
Another good reason that there are many acute troubles by following an exotic language in terms of living in that country is that the language is next to the culture. Hence, adapting takes time for a person who migrate to live in abroad, undoubtedly, there are various social problems due to this adoption. Lacking language skills which may be a reason a person be denied by the native people. In the other words, the migrant might tackle with serious mental problems like depression. there are some people who return to their country after a short-time living in abroad due to language lack-skill.
In conclusion, communicating with foreign people by using their language have social and practical consequences and I totally agree with this view because it involves various issues for the migrants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15277777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75920876787 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493055555556 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0997017482 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241033647601 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092306866438 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593521911135 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165539327937 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251548037755 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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