In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from death health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is clear that levying unhealthy foods becomes a subject of controversial topics in recent years because of its effects on society. Although some claim that raising the tax rate on this kind of food is the ineffective policy, it definitely bestows a net positive benefit for the community.
There are some advantages of this strategy to personal life. First, the eye-catching benefit is the reducing of high-level modern lifestyle diseases in number, such as diabetes and obesity. In fact, since consuming too much fast food is among the leading causes of mortality as those diseases are supposed to be the major reasons of some health issues, like heart attack and stroke irrespective of age or gender, eating less of non-nutritive foods allows people get a better health. Second, it’s also a good way that helps maintain a happy marriage. Actually, if family members spend more time to prepare the meals together, all members would be closer to each other, which makes them become more sympathy and understanding that are important for a long successful marriage.
In addition, the excise taxes offer a lot of benefits for society. First, by imposing a higher tax on non-nutritious foods, government can collect an additional revenue that stimulates the development of communities. In fact, the massive excess taxing amount on unhealthy foods can use to subsidize other nutritious products or ensure the public programs in the important sectors better funded, including education and health, which definitely helps improve the quality of life. Second, this policy also benefits the environment in some ways. This means that there’re more green areas instead of manufactures since the decrease in the consumption of unhealthy food accompanies by the increase in the need of healthier food, especially vegetable-related products, which resolves the global warming situation at some point.
In conclusion, although the less nutritious foods should not be subject to a higher tax at some level, this strategy brings a myriad of advantages for the community. By accompanying by other strategies, this policy is conducive to the economic development without harmfulness to the public health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38904899135 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95477459181 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582132564841 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1522911516 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269965931862 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833317849469 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563356030775 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162216696864 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016281003079 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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