The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Increasingly popularization of processed foods has received a great deal of media attention because of their effects on societies in recent decades. Although some claim that the commercially prepared foods contribute to making human life become more convenient, there still exist many limitations.
On the one hand, there are a number of advantages of convenient foods in some aspects. First, saving time for other interesting activities is the undeniable benefit of these kinds of foods. Actually, since ready-to-eat products are almost prepared at factories before distributing to supermarkets or stores, a massive time that spent for cooking is definitely reduced, which allows people, especially women, enjoy their time with families and friends. Second, effortless distribution is also a remarkable advantage. This means that there are no concerns about foods when traveling, especially long trips, even if the local foods are totally different with your traditional ones, bringing convenient foods is trouble-free as majority of these foods is packaged.
On the other hand, prepared foods are not without downsides in a few ways. First, they cause detrimental effects on people’s health. In fact, in order to lengthen the expiration, not only nutrients, including vitamins and minerals, are removed from but also an excessive amount of unhealthy stuffs, like additives, preservatives and artificial coloring, are added into these foods, which causes some serious health issues, such as heart-related diseases and diabetes. Second, the environment is also affected by the ready-made foods. For instance, since these products are required to package for easily storing and distributing, a huge amount of waste that is released to environment, which causes the rise of gas emission due to distribution process and disposal management.
In conclusion, given that there are many benefits of convenient foods, there are still limitations. By researching new food production technologies, human can deal with this situation in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69706840391 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07934589901 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622149837134 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7862859531 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151734284245 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503698097587 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527350988318 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916202586585 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041095319266 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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