Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest taxpayers money in healthcare, others believe that money should be use in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
It is becoming a controversial issue that in which sector governments should invest money. Some people suggest that governments must pay attention on health sector, while some of considered others sector. There are arguments on both sides on this very topical debate and I will discuss them now.
On one hand, healthcare section is most pivotal for a country because sometimes a country how developed it depends on how much improved their health sector. Spending money on health sector could bring a healthier and happier society, so bureaucrats should emphasis on it. For example, those people, who cannot afford to pay doctors fee, their charge must be free, on that case and authorities provide some free medicines and treatments to relive their economical pressure.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied the importance of others sector like education and transportation. There have also arguments to support this view. A country need to ameliorate others infrastructure in order to turn into a developed country. So distributing taxpayers money to improve other public facilities is also valuable for citizen. For instance, education sector should have received similar funds because there are so many children, those who are not capable to pay their school fee, which should not be ignored by bureaucrats. They have right to get basic needs form authorities.
To sum up, though health sector is the paramount area in a nation but others faculty have similar importance, so authorities should take strategy to spend money in order to make debate among people about this phenomenon.
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...health sector, while some of considered others sector. There are arguments on both sid...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... To sum up, though health sector is the paramount area in a nation but others fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2265625 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75115110408 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3695389928 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226265300686 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857513317032 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631111191024 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14616845232 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578984594625 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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