You cannot got to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer, express you gratitude, explain you like your current job very much.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the agreement which I got from your company. I regret to inform you that I have decided not to be part of your team.
After careful consideration I refused the offer because my current manager have given me better position and increased my salary even more than I expected.
I would like to express my grateful for you and your company that you gave me the chance to introduce myself on interview. I am honoured that you have chosen my application. I am sure, that your company can give their employs plenty opportunity to develop their skills and knowledge.
I have to mention that I really enjoy my current job because it gives me chance gather wide range experience as an architect.
At the same time, I am able to cooperate with international companies and share my experience with other colleagues.
Thank you for your time and I wish you and your company all the best.
Yours faithfully
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree? 61
- you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, whe 73
- you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, whe 56
- You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 61
- You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed that you have chosen my application. I am sure, that your company can give the...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...evelop their skills and knowledge. I have to mention that I really enjoy my ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77380952381 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64733104806 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.154054707 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286754047574 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12021985554 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1013031402 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14367901472 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112044622217 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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