you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, where you think tou left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Dear Tom,
I hope you're well. I'm writing to let you know that when I visited you last weekend I have forgotten my coat.
It si yellow coat with long-sleeve and black wide belt. I'm not sure where I left it, but assume that I put it on a chair in a corridor when I moved from your house. If it is not there, please check in wardrobe in room where I slept.
What is the most important for me I realised that in the coat pocket I left my credit card. So now I have a big headache because of that. I don't have easy access to my money, and almost every two-day I have to visit bank to collect them.
I would be really grateful if you could send me this card via post letter. I know that you are going to visit me in next month but I'm afraid that I'm not able to wait so long on this card. Getting back coat is not so urgent for me and I can wait on it when you will come to me.
Please, let me know if you could do me this favour.
Keep in touch
Sue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Tom, I hope youre well. Im writing to let you know that w...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Tom, I hope youre well. Im writing to let you know that when I vis...
^^
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t with long-sleeve and black wide belt. Im not sure where I left it, but assume th...
^^
Line 13, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I slept. What is the most important for me I realised that in the coat pocke...
^^
Line 13, column 142, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... have a big headache because of that. I dont have easy access to my money, and almos...
^^^^
Line 17, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould send me this card via post letter. I know that you are going to visit me in ...
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Line 17, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...are going to visit me in next month but Im afraid that Im not able to wait so long...
^^
Line 17, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sit me in next month but Im afraid that Im not able to wait so long on this card. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.91959798995 5.12529762239 76% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.885004935 2.80592935109 67% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8442413283 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.0 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281815190403 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914069647557 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868702817403 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163132496127 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911236769068 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 13.0946893788 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 50.2224549098 179% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 11.3001002004 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.86 12.4159519038 39% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.73 8.58950901804 67% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.7795591182 46% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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