The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
<p style="margin-top: 10px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">The diagrams illustrate some proposed changes to the central area of the town of Islip.</p><p style="margin-top: 10px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">It is clear that the principal change to the town will be the construction of a ring road around the centre. Various other developments with regard to shops and housing will accompany the building of this road.</p><p style="margin-top: 10px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">Looking at the map of Islip as it is now, we can see that a main road runs through its centre from east to west. The second map shows the planned pedestrianisation of this road. Traffic will be diverted on to a dual carriageway that will form a ring around the town centre.</p><p style="margin-top: 10px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">Currently there is a row of shops along either side of the main road. However, it appears that the shops along the north side of the new pedestrian street will be demolished to make way for a bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing area. The shops along the south side of the street will remain, but it seems that the town’s park will be reduced in size so that more new houses can be built within the ring road.</p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 763, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'run'?
Suggestion: run
... it is now, we can see that a main road runs through its centre from east to west. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50423728814 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.17061744134 2.65546596893 157% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504237288136 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.699408334 43.030603864 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.5 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.3333333333 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113262726879 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077982239436 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577235534447 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113262726879 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.2329268293 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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