Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?
One of the major sources of earning of government is tax. It is has taken from citizens who are living and working permanently in the state or a country. Many people think that rather than paying tax to the government, they should keep it. I Completely disagree disagreeing with this statement, and consider that tax must be paid by every citizen.
It is thought by some [people] that government should not impose tax on citizens income. Money is the most essential thing of human life nowadays. Earning money is not much easy at all. Consequently, people are spending two-third of their entire life at work; as a recent study shows. for earning money. The recent study on people’s life has provided this information. If they were asked to pay tax from their earning, it would be difficult for them to pay. In recent market, price of daily necessary groceries is high. However, these are daily necessecities they need to buy regularly. People work hard to earn as most [much] as they can to fulfill their family needs. Moreover, they are surviving to lead their life. [In such circumstances,] In this situation paying tax to government [is an additional] burden for many of them.
Imposing tax on people’s income is much needed for the development of a country or nation. Although, it is difficult to pay tax to the government, but this money will help the government to spend in various departments. For instance, government could invest on medical and education sector to improve the quality and could make those services free for the residence. Moreover, government could build more roads and bridges, where it needs and could invest other under develop areas to enhance the quality of lifestyle.
To conclude, People must pay their income tax regularly to contribute continuous development of their country. Finally, I think government should be aware to induct tax on people’s income and must check that it should not be difficult to pay back for the residence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...hat government should not impose tax on citizens income. Money is the most essential thi...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... life at work; as a recent study shows. for earning money. The recent study on peop...
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Line 5, column 747, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ]
... lead their life. [In such circumstances,] In this situation paying tax to governm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, third, as to, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02409638554 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79979074296 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7179319272 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8181818182 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295911426696 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929442483811 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731498656597 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192222540155 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847676084705 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.