Some people believe that a college or a university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views, which view do you agree with? Explain why?

Every single person has right to get education and a college or a university education should be available to all students whosoever is interested or want to study further. Higher education should not be only for good students because it is every one's equal right.

Already our education system has various exam system and among of thousands only hundreds get managed themselves to get qualified with their hard work and knowledge. Almost all the entrance exams like CAT, UPSC, NET, ISRO etc. all are worldwide applicable to every student. And for once if we start higher education only for good students then what would be the future of other students. Because of biased education system in schools and colleges, all have equal opportunities to get admission in desired field.

In today's world, education has become quiet expensive and mainly poor people are suffering. Our education system should not be based on neither according to class of people nor only for good students. Those who are already good enough in study, they themselves get managed to clear tough exams and got position in their desirable institutions. But now even education system like schools, colleges and institutions has become corrupted and they demand high donations for students admission.

Delhi govt. schools have become a fantastic example for the study of all class of students. Our govt. must have to start many other policies, scholarship ideas for the betterment of education system. Even the prestigious colleges and schools should have to start to take admissions only on the basis of performance and hard work of students (Entrance exams). Poor people does not get admission in these institutions because of their lower financial status and poverty too.

Only govt. can tackle or eradicate these issues by applying strict and mandatory laws on educational institutions by not taking admission on donation basis but should depend on performance of students.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Entrance exams. Poor people does not get admission in these institutions because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22929936306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65896676622 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503184713376 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.703144236 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306641356178 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963990957841 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872200920097 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193270670775 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680519442258 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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