Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: Helvetica;">it is often argued that people in multiple culture and ages may come under one ritm through music. In my opinion, people with various cultures and ages can be united with the power of music because it has no boundaries. This essay will first assert how music can be a powerful way to different nation and period together.</p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: Helvetica;">Firstly, People of different nations come together by music for charity. Sometimes, renowned bands visit one country to another for collecting money and give them any war-devastated country. Here people just feel the music and they attend the concert when language and culture have no barrier. For instance, an American musician collects the donation for the liberation war of Bangladesh. In this way, music becomes a powerful media beyond the culture.</p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: Helvetica;">Secondly, music can be a media of togetherness of different ages of people when it comes to the country song or the national anthem. it is the ritual of the country that all ages of people show honor to their national anthem. For example, in Bangladesh when people hear the national anthem, they just stand up and show their dignity. hence, music able to come to people of different ages together.</p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: Helvetica;">In conclusion, music has the vast power of bringing people together of all nation-state and all ages. sometimes music collects money for any nation and sometimes music bringing up people in one shade.</p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96703296703 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.35737958329 2.65546596893 164% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.4154082171 43.030603864 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.090909091 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220218966879 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109779308217 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690494589026 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169226060949 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499160353176 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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