The pie chart compares the five categories of expenditures in the UK and New Zealand over the period of 28 years.
Overall, the largest proportion of total expense in New Zealand is food and drinks, while the UK spent on leisure. However, food and drink fell in in both countries, and lowest expenses for other expenses.
The largest proportion of total expenditures is accounted for leisure in the UK (27%) in the year of 1980 and it rose 7% to reach 34% in 2008, and it was three fold of other expenses. The half of total expense are taken by food and drinks, and utility bills, where the difference between them is exactly 3%. However, though former declined at 13% ,latter experienced a rise of 2% to reach at 28%. Transportation cost are approximately similar in both year with a slight drop.
Food and drinks are stood at highest positions in New Zealand in 1980 and fell about 4%, in 2008. The costs of utility bills is around threefold as high as that of other expenses in both years. There are almost no difference between transport and leisure expenses in 1980 as well as after 28 years later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56333407169 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4315511774 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861081367293 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350455928842 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385028092016 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541937586585 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039244259901 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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