the consumption of fast food in UK
The given line graph illustrates the amount of fast food consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990, namely fish & chips, hamburger and pizza. Overall, the quantities of fast food eaten had doubled within this period of time. The consumption of hamburger, fish and chips had increased sharply over the course of 20 decades from 1970 while the number of pizzas eaten per week experienced an opposite pattern.
In 1970, pizza touched the peak of just above 300 grams per week but had a slight downward trend for the next 15 years. Meanwhile, the amount of hamburger and fish & chips eaten were respectively at about 30 grams and 80 grams. In 1985, the consumption of fish and chips increased dramatically by approximately 200 grams and hamburger’s figure saw a rapid rise to well over 100 grams per week.
On the other hand, pizza moderately declined from 300 grams to 200 grams for fish & chips to reach the highest point. Over the last 5 years to 1990, hamburger experienced a 3-fold increase by just below 200 grams consumed while fish & chips quickly increased from 300 grams to the peak of 500 grams. Despite a great start, the consumption of pizza ended up with just above 200 grams at the rock bottom point.
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...rise to well over 100 grams per week. On the other hand, pizza moderately decl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77725118483 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57097835303 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535545023697 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9491267911 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139687348622 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677676631932 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835821800519 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111374496705 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116010747594 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.