The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK per week from 1970 to 1990

Essay topics:

The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990.

The given line graph illustrates the amount of fast food like hamburgers, fish & chips, and pizza consumed weekly by UK citizens over a period of two decades starting from 1970 to 1990.

Overall, as can be seen from the graph, it is clear that while an upward trend was seen in the consumption of fish & chips and hamburgers in the UK per week, the opposite was true for the figure for pizza. In addition, the amount of fish & chips consumed experienced the most noticeable change during the research period.

In 1973, the amount of pizza eaten weekly by the population in the UK was the highest, at about 300 grams, while the figures for fish & chips and pizza were significantly lower, at approximately 80 grams and 30 grams respectively. In 1985, the consumption of pizza per week rose dramatically and became the kind of fast food consumed most at roughly 300 grams. At the same time, there was a gradual increase in the figure for hamburgers, whereas the amount of pizza consumed weekly slightly declined to about 200 grams.

In 1990, the consumption of fish & chips per week in the UK rocketed by 200 grams to 500 grams and became the highest figure in the chart. Additionally, a dramatic climb of 180 grams to nearly 300 grams was seen in the figure for hamburger. Meanwhile, the amount of pizza eaten weekly by UK individuals slowly fell to about 210 grams.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ely 80 grams and 30 grams respectively. In 1985, the consumption of pizza per week...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61882462166 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9347950086 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278503739404 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129026221806 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118590590175 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202237024382 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100172583404 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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