The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of water utilised for industrial use agriculture use and domestic use in six various conitents( North America ,South America, Europe and Africa Central Asia and South East Asia).
It can be clearly seen that the maximum use of water for industrial in North American which is consumed 48%. While almost 40% use of water for agriculture but the least spent water for domestic.Further, more then 70% required of water for agriculture in South America, whereas South America is least use of water for domestic and industrial which are 19% and 10%.But, the highest utilised of water for industrial in Europe as compared to other continents, while the spent of water minority percentage for domestic, whereas almost a third proportion use of water for agriculture.
Moving further, almost similar use of water Southeast Asia Africa and Central Asia for agriculture which are 81% and 84%and 88%, while use of water least for industrial and domestic which are respectively.
Purani can be clearly seen that Europe and North America off water highest for industrial, all continents more use of water for agriculture compared to other purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e in six various conitents North America ,South America, Europe and Africa Central...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Further
... but the least spent water for domestic.Further, more then 70% required of water for ag...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... spent water for domestic.Further, more then 70% required of water for agriculture i...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
...in South America, whereas South America is least use of water for domestic and industria...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ic and industrial which are 19% and 10%.But, the highest utilised of water for indu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22513089005 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77042022101 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434554973822 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.734554592 43.030603864 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.6 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205308272858 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133777504244 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329187930742 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14500128174 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299947805342 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 61.2550243902 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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