In the contemporary era, addiction is one of the most significant issues that the government and people worry about. Drug abuses among young people have a variety of reasons. In the following essay, its causes and some measures will be discussed.
At first, weak willpower and personality deficiencies could be the most important reason for addiction. Surveys show that sixty percent of youth tend to abuse drugs through their inadequate friends. Moreover, the family environment and everything that refer to it, play a crucial role in this issue. Divorce, family conflicts, poor decent housing boost pressure on youth and increase their addiction risks. Furthermore, unemployment accelerates the possibility of drug abuse. Joblessness people lose their self-esteem and substantial life satisfaction, they almost suffer from financial problems and may tend to abuse drugs and alcohol to overcome their difficulties.
On the one hand, the best measure to solve this problems should be taken by individuals. Everybody has to strengthen self-confidence and willpower and avoid things that hurt health. They must not be in inappropriate and unhealthy situations. On the other hand, the government should take action against drug trafficking and applying punishments oriented approach. Also, it should limit the availability of addictive drugs by tightening up laws on drug possession. Besides, raising people's awareness about addiction through education and advertisement is necessary. Moreover, eliminate inequalities and providing job opportunities help youth to concentrate on their work and do not go toward drugs.
In conclusion, addiction is a vitally important problem in all societies. The government has to promote public education and legislate some preventing laws to combat it. Individuals also have responsibilities in order.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...the one hand, the best measure to solve this problems should be taken by individuals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73992673993 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19003668387 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4112212425 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4736842105 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160091744257 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456006161913 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406025373149 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895319348232 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268057145554 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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