You have just read an article in an International travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why its important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir Alex
I’m writing to you relevant your magazine article which released yesterday. I have being reading and following this magazine and I thought you and your time are really success to in this occupation.Therefore when I saw this incorrect information I disappointed and I want to write to you relevant this circumstance.As you know it your last magazine published some information about accommodation at Istanbul. However, unfortunately it’s not correct. You should write the correct price for stay in the town. Because when people decide to come here, they could be frustrate about this issues.And also, this magazine has a lot of followers such as most of young person.Therefore especially for this young person please release new information on the web site at concurrent with magazine.This could be provide the reach into flowers for real information.Moreover it’s vital of your journal reputation.Therefore I hope your time will be handle it to this misguided.
I’m waiting to your answer for my feedback.
Your faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, really, so, therefore, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50909090909 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58920941747 2.54303337028 141% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.98724439 44.8134815571 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.5 76.5299724578 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 4.34317383033 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228978245407 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110645103057 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749453434268 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14281436811 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766806656006 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 8.37731958763 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 70.7449484536 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.