“SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In the stated argument, recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville, proves that the city is superior to live than Middlesburg which was earlier the headquater of SuperCorp's. The author also concluded as Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one to stay & work. I am not so convienced with these mentioned assumptions that middlesburg is not a good place to live in.
Firstly, Corporateville is population is growing now a days cannot justify that it is best to live in.The reasons can be new job opportunities or lifestyles. Author has not cited any references mentioning about middlesburg which is evidence for this gap.
In addtion, Middlesburg is a urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban which donot state that all employees agreed with this decision. Moreover, it will be injustice if we have no clue how people is aware about the super amrkets availabilty in new corporateville. They have no imagination how they will survive if they need to travel 10 KM for super market or for hospitals. The author needs to enlighten this part to convince.
Perhaps, now people are shifiting to urban areas to accomodate all necessites due to huuge availabilities of everything round the clock as Supercorp is shifting to rural area it can be a concern for parents as well who are having kids. The kids need to travel long distance if the school is far which will be a reverse effect for the employees which is also missing in the above argument.
Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg which has no evidencial proof with this lower income tax will benefit all the employees. It has no concrete proof to show it will be a good decision for all. They should have wisdom to choose the decision beforesupercorp making any finalization.
To conclude, the provided evidences were unpersuasive . Author should givea choice to everyone before this relocation & produce enough proof it is far better in terms of many aspects that corporateville is far better to live in not only due to curtail of income tax but also as a locality.
- “SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Mor 53
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 50
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1802 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.767 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.91 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.828 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...Corporateville is population is growing now a days cannot justify that it is best to live ...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...orateville is population is growing now a days cannot justify that it is best to live ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nnot justify that it is best to live in.The reasons can be new job opportunities or...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...this gap. In addtion, Middlesburg is a urban area and according to an employe...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his gap. In addtion, Middlesburg is a urban area and according to an employee ...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be a reverse effect for the employees which is also missing in the above argum...
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Line 11, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the provided evidences were unpersuasive . Author should givea choice to everyone ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 377.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89389920424 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99082160124 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9136019948 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3125 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178367147623 0.218282227539 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547173292919 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755797882109 0.0701772020484 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091240928895 0.128457276422 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900241284206 0.0628817314937 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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