The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten-year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line charts given illustrate the information regarding the number of international and national students enrolling in Australian university in a decade.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the total of overseas and local students. Also, the figure of first-year of international students increased significantly during the period. In addition, the commencing number of local students fluctuated in the meantime.
In the first reported year, the total number of the international student was 20,000, doubling in every four years, finishing at approximately 4 times higher that of the first figure in 2010. Meanwhile, 10,000 international students enrolled in the university in 2000, increasing two times higher in the first 6 years, and finishing the period just above 40,000.
Regarding the local students, 400 thousand students studied at the university in 2001, followed by a substantial grow between 2002 and 2007, before levelling off at around 600 thousand from 2008 to 2010. In contrast, the figure for first-year students commenced just below half that of the total number, rising by approximately 30,000 in 2002 and remained unchanged until the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54098360656 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01793735732 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6569625028 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242909565264 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116479148503 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284698946201 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160683329253 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198414755934 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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