Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people believe that computers are the most important invention of the last century. While I agree that computers play a key role in today 's world, I would argue that there are a couple of inventions that are far more crucial.
On the one hand, computers are an indispensable part of our lives for some reasons. Firstly, a huge amount of data can be stored on computers, which assists people in learning, researching and teaching effectively. For example, university students can easily find thousands of past papers or studies when using computers in their library. This helps to improve overall human knowledge. Secondly, computers help people who live far away from each other to interact easily. For instance, business meetings can be conducted via video conferences, which allows companies from different countries to do business together.
On the other hand, I believe there are a few more important inventions in the last century. The first one that should be mentioned is the creation of smartphones. These phones are incredibly useful as people can do many things such as sending an email or reading an online article only with a device in their pocket. Additionally, the development of electric cars which are environmentally friendly should also receive attention. As these cars run on electricity instead of traditional fuels, they do not release
harmful gas into the atmosphere, which significantly reduces air pollution and improves citizens' health.
In conclusion, while it is true that computers play an important part of our lives, I believe that there are other inventions that have been more vital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Harmful
...raditional fuels, they do not release harmful gas into the atmosphere, which signific...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23574144487 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86887609651 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9081193177 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198960189778 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685077389153 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615281062545 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106663357292 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803733882513 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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