Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and governments should encourage businesses to move from cities to rural areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
In many metropolises, the severe traffic and housing problems are reaching an alarming level, which needs the solutions from the government. It is believed that authorities should incentivize corporations to resettle their company in the countryside. Such a measure has its own merits and downsides.
As a matter of fact, the encouragement in relocating firms from conurbations to sparsely-populated areas has some noteworthy benefits. Initially, the reestablishment of businesses is closely associated with alleviation of burden related to public infrastructure. It is because there are lots of spaces available for the construction of more houses and factories, thereby diminishing the level of air pollution stemmed from manufacturing activities. Another advantage would be that local economy is motivated to develop due to this measure. The more companies established in rural areas, the more occupational opportunities dispensed to the cheap workforce. Therefore, local people might have chance to lead their own better lives.
Nevertheless, there are numerous drawbacks that need to be taken into consideration. First and foremost, this may be a penalty toward enterprises’ financial status. It is often the case that relocating a business to countryside restricts the access to its mainstream markets, material suppliers as well as network of partners, which contributes to the decline of its revenue and productivity. Furthermore, reestablishment puts firms at a risk of extra expenditure such as extravagant costs of construction, operation and recruitment new manpower.
In conclusion, this solution is worth considering to improve current situation. However, there are pros and cons of implementing such a policy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering improving'.
Suggestion: considering improving
... In conclusion, this solution is worth considering to improve current situation. However, there are p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84645669291 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59064830992 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657480314961 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7929719319 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140798269899 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357057052483 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318338895714 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697792187807 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382271609118 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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