Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this letter in regards with an issue which I am facing due to change in the train schedule. Generally, I used to prefer train rather than any other public transports because, it roughly takes half an our to reach at my company while other public services takes more than one our due to high range of traffic.
However, My name is carol and I used to travel in train namely 'London train' at 8:55 a.m. from the station called M.G. road to commercial street but now, timing had been shuffled to 9:20 a.m.till I reach there it will be 9:50 a.m. Like wisely, it is affecting my carrier. It seem to me that, train is more comfortable as well as convenient transportation for journey. Firstly, the railway station is very nearby to my home. Secondly, It takes less time in compare to any other transports like example; bus, car, motor bikes etc. Lastly, If possible to reschedule the timing as before than it that will be grateful of you. I request you to please look in to the matter and try to do needful.
Looking forward to get positive response from your side as soon as possible.
Thinking you,
Yours faithfully.
carol
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir/madam, I am writing t...
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Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter in regards...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'our'?
Suggestion: an; our
...ansports because, it roughly takes half an our to reach at my company while other publ...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: HOUR_OUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hour' (=60 minutes)?
Suggestion: hour
...ports because, it roughly takes half an our to reach at my company while other publ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ne our due to high range of traffic. However, My name is carol and I used to ...
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Line 6, column 75, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (London) must be used with a third-person verb: 'trains'.
Suggestion: trains
...I used to travel in train namely London train at 8:55 a.m. from the station called M....
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Line 6, column 279, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
... wisely, it is affecting my carrier. It seem to me that, train is more comfortable a...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o the matter and try to do needful. Looking forward to get positive response...
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Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
... to do needful. Looking forward to get positive response from your side as soo...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... from your side as soon as possible. Thinking you, Yours faithfully. ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... soon as possible. Thinking you, Yours faithfully. carol
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... Thinking you, Yours faithfully. carol
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Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Carol
...Thinking you, Yours faithfully. carol
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64734299517 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45308853331 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1590336307 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228887746886 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868627983222 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603159599758 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895201105791 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619337799073 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.