The bar graph represents the factors why elderly choose to study, while the pie chart describes how majority of the population perceive on the expenses incurred in elderly education would be subsidize. It can be clearly seen that interest in the subject got the pinnacle of 40%, while meeting people remained the least reason for study in graying education.
Let us take a closer look at the bar graph, first reason to study was to attained qualifications and it appears the second highest having 38%. Next was the fact of helpful to current job and it attained the third place at 22%. However, to improve prospects of promotion and those who enjoyed learning or studying were both below a quarter. Lastly, the reason to be able to change employment achieved 12%.
Meanwhile, in the pie chart where expenses should be quoted, it shows that more than 1 in 3 should be covered by the employer. A quarter for the tax payer and only 40% that is the vertex percentage would be paid for by the student.
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first reason to study was to attained qualifications
first reason to study was to attain qualifications
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it appears as the second highest
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