THe charts below show the results of a survey of adult education.The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study.The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The figures illustrate the cosequence of grown-up education's poll.whileThe bar graph reveals the causes of adults's decisions to study,the pie chart indicates how it is thought by people the adult education cost should be divided .
In general overall,it is apparent from the information provided throught a bar chart ,that the major cause for grown-up to study is having intrest in subject by 40 percent,however meeting people has the least importance for adults as a reason of studying at 9 percent.
As it is evident from the bargraph,having intrest in subject as well as gaining exprience are the most vital reasons to study for adults at 40 and 38 percent respectively.Whereas,being able to change careers or meeting people are the least imperative causes for adult by 12 and 9 percent respectively.It is also worthy to note that other reasons namely improving prospects of promotion as well as enjoying studying or learing both see a similar percent by 20 in this survey.
As can be seen from the pie chart given,the cost of each course ought to be divided into 3 vary parts namely individuals,employers as well as tax payers.It is patent that individuals and taxpayers have the most allocated part related to cost of the course by 40 and 35 percent respectively.In contrast taxpayers is the smallest section of this course's cost at 25 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99561403509 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40008423928 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.769127357 43.030603864 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.75 112.824112599 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 22.9334400587 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.23603664747 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238475043531 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158945772041 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758580448451 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158945772041 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758580448451 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.2329268293 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 61.2550243902 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 10.3012195122 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.