Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
The given argument concludes saying that they cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered as there are very small chances of death due it.The argument seems to be incomplete and with some absence of data with which the writer concluded the above thing.
Firstly,complete information about which area is being surveyed is not mentioned in the given argument.If the argument states how big or small the area is, it can be determined whether the inoculation to all the people residing there can be done or not.Also, the people who are more affected in the area should be done with the vaccines and inoculations and other people might be warned about its effects so that they can take precautionary measures.
Secondly,the argument states that cow flu is not dangerous and there is very small possibility of a person dying from it.This statement contradicts with the first statement of the argument which says many lives can be saved if innoculations against cow flu are administered routinely.Even the argument stating that there is only a small possibility of death due to cow flu is concluded without any significant reasoning.
Thirdly,the argument states the word routinely.If not routinely ,the innoculations should be done after a gap of a particular span based on the prescription of some expert (which is lacking in the argument) or should be conducted in minor areas daily or weekly.In this way also, the innoculations against cow flu can be done and considerable lives might be saved.Even if there ho harm to life due to cow flu,people might be releived once they are innoculated.
Conclusively,it seems that the writer has justified his or her conclusion based on some incomplete data.No pefect reasoning is given in the argument.The argument is based on some wishy washy observations which are likely to be incorrect.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 318 350
No. of Characters: 1522 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.223 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.786 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.782 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 92 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 63.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.025 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.567 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.208 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... are very small chances of death due it.The argument seems to be incomplete and wit...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the writer concluded the above thing. Firstly,complete information about which...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , complete
...concluded the above thing. Firstly,complete information about which area is being s...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... is not mentioned in the given argument.If the argument states how big or small th...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...eople residing there can be done or not.Also, the people who are more affected in th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they can take precautionary measures. Secondly,the argument states that cow fl...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... precautionary measures. Secondly,the argument states that cow flu is not dan...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...l possibility of a person dying from it.This statement contradicts with the first st...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...inst cow flu are administered routinely.Even the argument stating that there is only...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed without any significant reasoning. Thirdly,the argument states the word rou...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ny significant reasoning. Thirdly,the argument states the word routinely.If n...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...,the argument states the word routinely.If not routinely ,the innoculations should...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ates the word routinely.If not routinely ,the innoculations should be done after a...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...onducted in minor areas daily or weekly.In this way also, the innoculations agains...
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Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Even
...e and considerable lives might be saved.Even if there ho harm to life due to cow flu...
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Line 7, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
... if there ho harm to life due to cow flu,people might be releived once they are innocul...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e releived once they are innoculated. Conclusively,it seems that the writer ha...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...hey are innoculated. Conclusively,it seems that the writer has justified his...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...onclusion based on some incomplete data.No pefect reasoning is given in the argume...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...fect reasoning is given in the argument.The argument is based on some wishy washy o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 303.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14191419142 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09147042397 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488448844884 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.8473053892 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.9247518354 57.8364921388 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 311.6 119.503703932 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.6 23.324526521 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.70786347227 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268034883393 0.218282227539 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157512835144 0.0743258471296 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756806375411 0.0701772020484 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157512835144 0.128457276422 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756806375411 0.0628817314937 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 14.3799401198 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 48.3550499002 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.197005988 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32208582834 123% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 12.3882235529 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.1389221557 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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