It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Today, many various news are broadcasting around us from local events to world ones. Some of them make us hopeful and unfortunately some others have negative effect on us. Although, enormous people prefer to have their routine life without any disruption, but I do not think so. In my view, knowing about our surrounding will provide a better life. I feel this way for 3 main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, regarding the issue of being aware of any activities in world, one might claim that we would have better perspective of that. Different places and people have unique experiences, which by knowing and using them in our personal life, we would be happier. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. 5 years ago when I found about Swedish residential conditions, I decided to immigrate to that country. At first, it was difficult for me to adapt with that culture, weather, language, and etc. But after a little time, I had tough how to live in that new place. Most importantly, this new country had not many of my born country's trouble like politic and economic problems. Had not I introduced with that country through news, I could have lived in my origin country yet.
Another aspect of knowing about global events even unpleasant ones is trying to find new solutions or even lessening their not well effects. It is an obligatory duty for each of us to try for preventing of anticipated dangers and unexpected ones. Especially, leaders, ellits and scientist in any field can help by their creative thinking and powerful status. To clarify, when biologists aware of critical situation for certain animals extinctions, They will cooperate for realizing it's sources and surviving them. As far as I remember, when I heard about developing air pollution, I decided to reduce it by using my bicycle instead of my car. By this strategy not only I have a healthier lifestyle, but I also could help to lowering this kind of pollution, however my role is trivial. I am sure if each person do this, we will have a better place for live. Thus, if we obtain update information of our world we can inhibit of many disasters.
Most importantly, having considered emergency needs, one might suggest that being aware about our world news is essential. There are some conditions, which many people in a country need help after earthquake, special epidemic disease, or even war. If we acquire detail information through media, we will be more effective in dealing with such situations. For example, last year, upon I heard about earthquake in a cold-weather city in my country, beside my government, I did my best for collecting private foods and clothes for them. If I had not inform, I could not have participated in that.
Overall, what drives somebody agrees that knowing world happening has many advantage fall in to 3 basic categories including having better life, making better place to live and being more effective
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much various news', 'a good deal of various news'.
Suggestion: much various news; a good deal of various news
Today, many various news are broadcasting around us from local e...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...t with that culture, weather, language, and etc. But after a little time, I had tough ho...
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Line 13, column 548, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'informed'.
Suggestion: informed
...oods and clothes for them. If I had not inform, I could not have participated in that....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, i feel, kind of, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2477.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.895256917 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7220671234 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4095801252 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7407407407 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7407407407 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14814814815 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157092067206 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427771332145 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524046085355 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101881831216 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406118457113 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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