Some people believe that one should get knowledge about culture of a different country before visiting it. Do the advantages of the same outweigh the disadvantages ?
Society has been regularly transformed as a natural part of evolution ever since the dawn of civilization. There are innumerable positive and negative outcomes of a change of such a magnitude. It has been observed that, some people prefer to gain knowledge about the culture of a country, before visiting it. This development has got more advantages and the key advantages pertaining to the same are elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, the root cause behind the topic at hand is Media Influence. Due to advancement in science and technology, people are now available with plethora electronic gadgets and devices such as mobile phones, laptops, computers, etcetera, where they can readily collect information about culture of different country. These include aspects such as food, clothing, lifestyle, local products, goods of a place. The prime benefit of this information is that, it can help an individual to form better social bonding and interaction with the people of different culture as the communication barrier get lifted up. Further it would remove social menaces like discrimination, racism, Xenophobia etcetera and generate peace and harmony worldwide.
Moving forth, although, it would be a problem for native people, as due to establishment of trade, the demand of local goods would decline. However, the merits of the propounded factor are far greater than the demerits. The information about the different cultures would not only enable the masses to explore a different place thoroughly and gain extensive knowledge about it, but also it can yield economic benefits as well. Better social unit would promote establishment of trade channels among different countries, for instance they can import the local goods which reflects the authenticity of that culture. Consequently it would become source of livelihood for the local people and would increase the diversity of products. As a result it would contribute substantially in financial growth of nation.
In the end, it can be said that everything has its pros and cons, it depends on people as rightful discrimination and wisely taken decisions would lead mankind towards a bright and bountiful future. There is no harm in collecting knowledge about a place before going there as it would bring more benefits instead of drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37602179837 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92303650881 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58310626703 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2331667013 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.058823529 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210167590033 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610341746989 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864478146741 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131627333677 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571137780473 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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