Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
Today’s modern life brings so many advances in technology that it is difficult for our lives to that of our grandparents. But in general, I do believe that our lives nowadays are easier and more and more comfortable than those of our grandparents. I will explain in the following essay.
First, communication was very difficult and people had to go to great lengths to established decent means of communicating to loved ones. The telephone was at its infancy stages and not everybody had a telephone line in their houses. I still remember, when I was nine or ten, some of our neighbors coming to our house to use our landline because the telephone company did not have enough lines to put in every house. furthermore, I remember, when I was living in London, at the beginning of the 1980s, I had to travel all the way to Picadilly Circus, to the main office of Telecom, so I could place a phone call to my mom in colombia. Instead, nowadays, the only thing I have to do to call abroad is to use a smartphone and I can call my mom in colombia while driving my car in the highways of Greensboro.
Second, traveling was expensive and uncomfortable, take for example airplane traveling. The cost of airplane tickets was so expensive only a few people could afford them. For example, my uncle when he traveled to Chicago in the 1970s, he had to buy his ticket using a large loan that he took from the local bank. it took him about two years to pay his loan. airline tickets have gotten so cheap, you can fly from Miami to colombia for less than 400 USD, this is cheaper than a visit to the dentist. furthermore, airplanes are more technological advancements, the level of comfort is a lot better than it used to be before airlines became so popular and affordable. They shake less, landing and take-off are smoother. All this thanks to the many sensors pilots are able to use during these procedures.
All in all, I am strongly believe that new advances in technology have improved our quality of life, making them more comfortable and easy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Airline
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, while, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 366.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64207650273 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74797110935 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 145.348785872 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551912568306 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.193495505 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9411764706 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165197844033 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495852176886 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461286483024 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103980719871 0.162205337803 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410420654801 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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