Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
living in this century is more easier than one handred years ago. In my point of view life today is better than past, so I'm completely agree with this idea. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay,
First of all, in my opinion Internet had a big impact on people lives. with internet we are more comfortable than any other times. we can use internet for our daily works or be update and knows all the news around the world and also internet gives us more idea and help us to be more productive. For example internet gives
companies idea that they can improve their apps quality, so they invent videocall for social media applications and gives their customers apportunity to make a video call to their family and friends who are in another city or country. and one of advantage of this invent is it help us to contorol our feelings and not be so much sad for distance between us and people who we care about. this example demonstrates how important internet can be.
Secondly, Nowadays goverments try to provide more and better equipment for us as a result, we have all basic needs and even more. we are not concern about distance between our house and work office like our grandparents because we have several choices to go to work like using buses or subway or taxies. These equipement have directly effect on our life and by access to good equipment we can live better, build a good life for our family and gives our children choice to live piecefully and follow their dreams. we know by spending time and going forward intellegence people invent stuff that help us to raise our life quality that these intellegence people can be you or your children who lives in a good situation and have access to whatever they need.
in conclusion, I strongly believe that living in this centurary is more pleasent and comfortable than living in one handred years ago that our grandparents lived. we have premmision to live more comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 7.30242825607 301% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 22.412803532 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 351.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68091168091 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46812127598 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.356688379 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153830048524 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681755838876 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598310902543 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966492760433 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607341959876 0.0443174109184 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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