Some people think parents should be forced to attend childcare course to learn how to take care of their children. Do you agree?
It is often argued that childcare course should be made mandatory for parents to learn how to look after their children. I agree with the notion, I think it is very important, specially with the rise of nuclear family, parenting course will help with both mental and physical growth of a child.
Firstly, with the more number of nuclear families, people lack a expert advice, that they use to get from grand parents in earlier times. It is very important for a child to have right diet, and I believe parents can take help from these courses to learn what is right food according to child's age. For example, one of my cousin had a hard time feeding her child, her child always had difficulties with food digestion. Upon seeing a doctor, they figured out that the food she was giving to her child was not appropriate according to her age. Hence, I think parenting courses will help parents, to give right diet to their child and help with a better physical growth of their child.
Secondly, mental growth is also very important for a child. All the children have different behavior and I think childcare courses will help parents to understand their mental state better. It will be easier for parents to understand their behavior, guide and correct them. For instance, according to one survey done by an organisation, it was shown that their was significant change is child's behavior after their parents took child care course, Kids were more disciplined and well behaved.
To conclude, I strongly believes that parenting courses will help parents a heap to raise and understand their children better.
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89818181818 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44515645361 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501818181818 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6821089854 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246913306788 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110490597175 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096884147342 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184814531999 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662777633103 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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