You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
* explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
* say how your work could be done while you are away
* ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Ravi,
I would like to work at our head office at London for half a year to enhance my current role as a sales lead. I writing to you to seek your usual support to get further-level approval.
My recent promotion on regional Sales lead requires some close work with the team members who is works in London. Therefore, I will be able to identify their exact challenge to make a high sale in that region. Additionally, skill enhancement training is offered more at Head Office than in offshore. Thus, I will be able to keep me up-to-date according to the market trend. Finally, I will regularly check and reply to the email and try to be available on mobile calls whenever is required. I hope you will offer me your usual support to get the entire arrangements for this request.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Saka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...nhance my current role as a sales lead. I writing to you to seek your usual suppo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67973856209 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60749092581 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8519043172 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202231804015 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717716478673 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562574579761 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13251087541 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068467530735 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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